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NL888 Posted 18 years ago
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01b00 If you want to or have to go to the court to settle the case, I suggest that the autopsy of the patient should be done before taking legal action;02b02font02br
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01b01font00 The patient had suffered primary severe diseases, such as high blood pressure, hemorrhage of brain stem. The cause of the death is not necessarily linked to the tracheotomy done by you:02font02b02br
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01b01font00 1) The subcutaneous emphysema of the patient existed objectively; the patient was nervous, short breathed, and thus led to the worsening of her condition;02font02b02br
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01b01font00 2) It is not clear yet whether there was mediastinal emphysema in the patient;02font02b02br
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01b01font00 3) Is it possible that certain problem of her cardiovascular system cost her life?02font02b02br
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01b01font00 4) Have you talked enough with the patient before operation? A patient like her who needed emergent operation needs a well conversation with her doctor before going to surgery room.02font02b0-
  

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  • 12font 12b 12font 12br 12br 11b 11font 10 The patient had suffered 11font 10severe 12font 12font 12b 11font 11b 10primary12b 12font 11b 11font 11del 10diseases12del 10 disorders, such as high blood pressure11font 10 and12font 10 hemorrhage of brain stem.
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11b10 If you want to or have to go to the court to settle the case, I suggest that the autopsy of the patient should be done before taking legal action11font10.12font
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