editing letter to management

Hi English Forums Guru,
Could you help me to edit my letter below in blue which I am going to send to my company's management later in the evening. I am not good in my english and wish your help to fix my grammar and sentences. Thanks

Hi Hari,


It has reached a time where we have to discuss concerning my contract term.


It is time for me to change my role as a contractor from Domain Tech company to permanent GSD staff.


I understand there is a contract clause and I hope this could be negotiated till a level that is agreeable by both parties

I felt sorry to say this as we have a very good relation between Domain Tech Company and me but below are the few problems that I am facing:

Problem faced:

1. 
   Don’t feel like being home in GSD (wanted to be closer to the team)
   
2. 
   No sufficient training
   
3. 
   pay rate is a lot lower than other contractors
   
4. 
   no benefits, bonuses and insurance
   
5. 
   no room for progression / inadequate opportunities for career advancement (if no training provided)
   
6. 
   insufficient basic medical coverage and healthcare program
   
7. 
   insufficient job security
   
8. 
   inadequate opportunities for professional development