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Mahdimiri Posted 7 years ago
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Editing an academic email to professors

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please help me with editing this academic email.


Dear Professor
I would appreciate if you could inform me of the possibility of working under your supervision for the PhD degree for the fall semester of 2020.

I am an MSc holder in the field of Mechanical Engineering and more precisely in Energy Systems. I obtained my degree from Sharood University with a total GPA of 4/4. I have studied your profile and some of your astonishing works in the field of Energy. I am so delighted that the result of my investigations are aligned with yours and we have many common interests.

I have attached my curriculum vitae to which I would like to draw your attention to my proficiencies for advanced works. I am able to industriously and enthusiastically undertake works on any topic needing your kind surveillance and control.

If you have any questions regarding my achievements and proficiencies, do not hesitate to contact me via my email address.

Thank you in advance for your attention to my email waiting for your response.

  

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Dear Professor I would appreciate it if you could inform me of the possibility of working under your supervision for the PhD degree for the fall semester of 2020. ) I am an MSc holder (unnatural) in the field of Mechanical Engineering and more precisely in Energy Systems. ) University with a total GPA of 4/4.

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  • Dear Professor I would appreciate it if you could inform me of the possibility of working under your supervision for the PhD degree for the fall semester of 2020.
  • ) I am an MSc holder (unnatural) in the field of Mechanical Engineering and more precisely in Energy Systems.
  • ) University with a total GPA of 4/4.
  • ) and some of your astonishing works (wrong form) in the field of E nergy.
  • (I'm not sure there is such a field.
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Dear Professor
I would appreciate it if you could inform me of the possibility of working under your supervision for the PhD degree for the fall semester of 2020. (So you want to be there for only one semester?)

I am an MSc holder (unnatural) in the field of Mechanical Enginee

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