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Kathirkaman Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Editing a sentence
One more:
"There is a perception that this sport has similar body image issues to those of ballet"
I feel the above sentence is syntactically (or grammatically?) wrong; the correct version I feel would be
"There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
Is my edit correct? If not, please explain why I'm wrong.
"There is a perception that this sport has similar body image issues to those of ballet"
I feel the above sentence is syntactically (or grammatically?) wrong; the correct version I feel would be
"There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
Is my edit correct? If not, please explain why I'm wrong.
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Yes, this is better: "There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
- Yes, this is better: "There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
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Yes, this is better:
"There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
"There is a perception that this sport has body image issues similar to those of ballet"
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