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Are the following sentence smooth enough?

In the literature of our organization, three concepts have always been used in order to remark the scope; accuracy, knowledge, and honesty. In all official documents such as vision and mission, annual reports, our mandate, and responsibilities of each team inside the organization, these three terms have been used over and over.
For an unknown reason (for the writer at least), the document has introduced a new concept into this group of words. It is “reliability”.

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Clive · Accepted Answer

Are the following sentence smooth enough? Here are a few edits and comments.

In the literature of our organization, three concepts have always been used in order to remark the scope.
remark does not seem a suitable word. What do you mean? scope of what?
These are accuracy, knowledge, and honesty. In all official documents such as vision and mission, annual reports, our mandate, and responsibilities of each team inside the organization, these three terms have been used over and over.
For an unknown reason (for the writer at least), the document has introduced a new concept into this group of three. It is “reliability”.

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