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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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"Through the representation of Marjane's search for belonging, Persepolis illustrates how individuals have a choice over where they feel they belong."
  

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Through Marjane's search for identity, Persepolis illustrates that individuals have a choice in where they belong.

  • Through Marjane's search for identity, Persepolis illustrates that individuals have a choice in where they belong.
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Through Marjane's search for identity, Persepolis illustrates that individuals have a choice in where they belong.

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