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Goldfish Posted 13 years ago
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Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran. This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran.
  

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goldfish Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran. This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran. You could have a look at this perhaps.

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  • goldfish Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran.
  • This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran.
  • You could have a look at this perhaps.
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goldfish Golestan Palace: the oldest historic monument in Tehran which was the Qajars' royal residence encloses about thirty showcases presenting almost everything related to Iran. This is a magnificent place with mirror walls, designed artefacts etc that makes it a must- visit place in Tehran.
You could have a look at this perhaps.
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