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Tuongvan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
edit my letter please
0 Dear teachers , 02 br
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00 Please help me edit the following letter: 02 br
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00 Application for Leave of Absence 02 br
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00 TO: -The administration of ABC High School 02 br
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00 - The teacher in charge of Class 11A 02 br
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00 Dear sirs , 02 br
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00 I ,the undersigned , am father /mother of N.T.HONG , who is currently the student of Class 11A , hereby respectfully request your permission to excuse HONG from the math and biology classes today . 02 br
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00 Cause of leave : HONG is ill and needs to see the doctor today 02 br
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00 I will ask Hong to make up what she will miss . 02 br
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00 Thanks for your understanding 02 br
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00 Respectfully yours 02 br
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00 Thank you in advanve 0-
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00 Please help me edit the following letter: 02 br
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00 Application for Leave of Absence 02 br
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00 TO: -The administration of ABC High School 02 br
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00 - The teacher in charge of Class 11A 02 br
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00 Dear sirs , 02 br
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00 I ,the undersigned , am father /mother of N.T.HONG , who is currently the student of Class 11A , hereby respectfully request your permission to excuse HONG from the math and biology classes today . 02 br
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00 Cause of leave : HONG is ill and needs to see the doctor today 02 br
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00 I will ask Hong to make up what she will miss . 02 br
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00 Thanks for your understanding 02 br
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00 Respectfully yours 02 br
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00 Thank you in advanve 0-
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02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Please help me edit the following letter: 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Application for Leave of Absence 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 TO: -The administration of ABC High School 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 - The teacher in charge of Class 11A 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Dear sirs , 00 You don't know the names of your child's teachers? If you do, I suggest 'Dear Mr. T.
- 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Please help me edit the following letter: 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Application for Leave of Absence 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 TO: -The administration of ABC High School 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 - The teacher in charge of Class 11A 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Dear sirs , 00 You don't know the names of your child's teachers?
- If you do, I suggest 'Dear Mr.
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- Hong, in Class 11A .
- 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Hong is ill, and needs to see the doctor today.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I don't know the appropriate level of formal politeness that is used in your country, but I'm sure that you do, so I'm just going to look at your English without suggesting any big changes. 02 br
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00 I don't know the appropriate level of formal politeness that is used in your country, but I'm sure that you do, so I'm just going to look at your English without suggesting any big changes. 02 br
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0 Thank you very much Clive , 02 br
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00 According to what you say , I should say : Dear Mr. Smith and Miss Jones ( the names of the teachers ) . But I send the letter not only to the teacher in charge of class 11A ,but also to the administration of the school . When I say" Dear sirs " I mean "Dear Mr. Smith (the teacher in charge ) and Dear Mr John and Mr Jack ( the principa
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00 According to what you say , I should say : Dear Mr. Smith and Miss Jones ( the names of the teachers ) . But I send the letter not only to the teacher in charge of class 11A ,but also to the administration of the school . When I say" Dear sirs " I mean "Dear Mr. Smith (the teacher in charge ) and Dear Mr John and Mr Jack ( the principa
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 Simple matters like this can depend very much on the country and culture that you live in. In Canada, this is a very minor matter and you would write only to the teachers involved. In fact, if the child is in high school, you don't even need to write at all. The child just does not go to school. You don't need to ask permission to be absent. 02 br
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00 Simple matters like this can depend very much on the country and culture that you live in. In Canada, this is a very minor matter and you would write only to the teachers involved. In fact, if the child is in high school, you don't even need to write at all. The child just does not go to school. You don't need to ask permission to be absent. 02 br
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0 Hi Clive, 02 br
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00 Maybe the culture in my country is different from Canada's , In my country , Vietnam when a student wants to stay away from school for whatsoever reason , he must present both to the principal or the vice principal and to the teacher in charge his/her parent's note so that the school makes sure his/her absence is justified .Normally the leave of absenc
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00 Maybe the culture in my country is different from Canada's , In my country , Vietnam when a student wants to stay away from school for whatsoever reason , he must present both to the principal or the vice principal and to the teacher in charge his/her parent's note so that the school makes sure his/her absence is justified .Normally the leave of absenc
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00 You may be right, this is a cultural thing. 00 00 But to western ears, I think this note is too formal, stiff and sounded like a legal document. In the 01 02 00 , we call it an “excuse note” which is rather simple. 00 Unless it's a leave for a few days, it's not necessary to write a note like this for a sick absence. For special
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00 You may be right, this is a cultural thing. 00 00 But to western ears, I think this note is too formal, stiff and sounded like a legal document. In the 01 02 00 , we call it an “excuse note” which is rather simple. 00 Unless it's a leave for a few days, it's not necessary to write a note like this for a sick absence. For special
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0 Hi Tuongvan, 02 br
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00 Since you would like the letter to be written in English, I must assume that you are talking about a policy of an International school, which could be run by foreigners. In that case, I think the system is not as formal as ours. I once taught at a British International school, I found its policy is rather simple, as a parent can just call a gi
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00 Since you would like the letter to be written in English, I must assume that you are talking about a policy of an International school, which could be run by foreigners. In that case, I think the system is not as formal as ours. I once taught at a British International school, I found its policy is rather simple, as a parent can just call a gi
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0 Hi Hoa Thai , 02 br
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00 No, It's not completely like you say . Only some large schools in big cities like HCM City and Hanoi use standard leave of absence request forms which are to be filled out with signatures of students 'parents . For most of schools , especially in suburban areas and provinces , parents have to write an application for leave of absence and hand it in
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00 No, It's not completely like you say . Only some large schools in big cities like HCM City and Hanoi use standard leave of absence request forms which are to be filled out with signatures of students 'parents . For most of schools , especially in suburban areas and provinces , parents have to write an application for leave of absence and hand it in
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Application for Leave
To,
(Name of the teacher)
In-charge of Class 11A
(School Address)
Sub: Grant of leave of absence-reg.
Dear Sir,
I ,the undersigned, am father/mother of N.T. HONG who is currently the student of Class 11-A
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