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Tuongvan Posted 18 years ago
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edit my letter please

Dear teachers ,

Please edit my application for unpaid leave of absence below :

APPLICATION FOR UNPAID LEAVE OF ABSENCE

To : The Management of A CHAU GRAPHIC DESIGN CO.,LTD
Dear sirs ,

I , the undersigned N TV , who is now working as a silk screen worker for the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request your permission to take three months’ unpaid leave /three months of unpaid leave ( Starting from May 1st till/through July 31st , 2007 ).

Reason for leave of absence : visiting my family abroad.

I will return to work after coming back from abroad.

Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter./Thank you very much for your consideration .

Ho Chi Minh City dated ....

Respectfully yours



Thank you in advance





  

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) and currently employed as a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st , 2007 . The reason for the request is to visit my family abroad. Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.

  • ) and currently employed as a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st , 2007 .
  • The reason for the request is to visit my family abroad.
  • Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.
  • Ho Chi Minh City dated ..
  • Respectfully yours ________________________________________ Keep it short.
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To : The Management of A CHAU GRAPHIC DESIGN CO.,LTD
Dear Sirs ,

I , Mary Smith, the undersigned N TV(what does this mean?) and currently employed as a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st , 2007 .

The
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Hi ,

I think " I , the undersigned NTV ,..." is ok . NTV here is the proper name of the applicant.In my opinion ,we should say:

Dear Sirs ,

I , the undersigned NTV , currently being a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st ,

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