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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Prof. (Name of Professor),
I would like to express my intense interest in University of (Name of University), particularly in the PhD program of "Name of PhD Position", and my sincere gratitude for your consideration of my application. I am the graduated master of pharmaceutical engineering from University of (Name of University), (Name of Country), and I am confident that my educations and experiences combined with my strong academic backgrounds fulfill your requirements.
I do believe a combination of my knowledge which is deeply built as a chemist and pharmaceutical engineer with a focus on drug design and development together with the practical experience I have gained in chemical and pharmaceutical research and development process (chemical reaction and synthesis, analytical method development and validation, pharmacology and toxicology studies, preformulation and formulation development, chemical process modeling and simulation, manufacturing process development and process validation) during six years at university and a year of working at (Name of Company) Pharmaceutical Company, (Name of Country), provides me with a firm confidence that I can try my best to do a process and formulation development in this program. In addition, three years working in (Name of Company) Company, (Name of Country), also assisted me in getting accustomed to the research principle and professional teamwork.
Since (Name of Country) is the most pioneer country in applying pharmaceutical and chemical science to pharmaceutical practice as well as the University of (Name of University) being the most qualified university to help me achieve my goals, I see (Name of Country)and specifically University of (Name of University) a wonderful next step for me in following my ambitions.
I thank you for providing the opportunity for me to submit this application. Please contact me in case there is anything else I need to provide. I look forward to communicating with you in the near future.
Sincerely,
Mohammad Mahdi Sepahi
Nov 10, 2015
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my contact information
Dear Prof. (Name of Professor),
I would like to express my intense interest in University of (Name of University), particularly in the PhD program of "Name of PhD Position", and my sincere gratitude for your consideration of my application. I am the graduated master of pharmaceutical engineering from University of (Name of University), (Name of Country), and I am confident that my educations and experiences combined with my strong academic backgrounds fulfill your requirements.
I do believe a combination of my knowledge which is deeply built as a chemist and pharmaceutical engineer with a focus on drug design and development together with the practical experience I have gained in chemical and pharmaceutical research and development process (chemical reaction and synthesis, analytical method development and validation, pharmacology and toxicology studies, preformulation and formulation development, chemical process modeling and simulation, manufacturing process development and process validation) during six years at university and a year of working at (Name of Company) Pharmaceutical Company, (Name of Country), provides me with a firm confidence that I can try my best to do a process and formulation development in this program. In addition, three years working in (Name of Company) Company, (Name of Country), also assisted me in getting accustomed to the research principle and professional teamwork.
Since (Name of Country) is the most pioneer country in applying pharmaceutical and chemical science to pharmaceutical practice as well as the University of (Name of University) being the most qualified university to help me achieve my goals, I see (Name of Country)and specifically University of (Name of University) a wonderful next step for me in following my ambitions.
I thank you for providing the opportunity for me to submit this application. Please contact me in case there is anything else I need to provide. I look forward to communicating with you in the near future.
Sincerely,
Mohammad Mahdi Sepahi
Nov 10, 2015
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Your letter is repetitive and difficult to follow in some parts. I also suggest you break it up into distinct paragraphs.
- Your letter is repetitive and difficult to follow in some parts.
- I also suggest you break it up into distinct paragraphs.
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Your letter is repetitive and difficult to follow in some parts. I also suggest you break it up into distinct paragraphs.
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