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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

EDIT MY ESSAY'S INTRODUCTION Please

No one has ever understood life. Its rudimentary philosophy lies far beyond a human’s conception. If someone could comprehend what life was he would have mastered it but we know that not even the richest or the happiest person on earth has a perfect life. What is a perfect life? A life which goes the way you want it to go. Where fate plays no part, only you are the driver. Believe me or not, I had that life. My life was my slave. It obeyed my commands with no objection. Emotion: smile
  

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"Believe me or not, I had that life. My life was my slave. It obeyed my commands with no objection.

— JohnParis

  • "Believe me or not, I had that life.
  • My life was my slave.
  • It obeyed my commands with no objection.
  • " Is this your thesis statement?
  • If it is, you'll need to rewrite.
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"Believe me or not, I had that life. My life was my slave. It obeyed my commands with no objection."

Is this your thesis statement?

If it is, you'll need to rewrite.

Your thesis statement should be only one sentence long because your essay should be about one thing and one thing only. You may make several assertions in your essay, but a
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