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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
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Since the beginning of this year, featuring "fast-growing in speed, vigorous in momentum, optimized in structure, and excellent in quality", the overall economy of our city has exhibited the coordinated development of "speed, structure and profits".
  

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' All of those quotation marks are unnecessary, Jobb-- every utterance should not be a slogan. English uses slogans much more sparingly, and generally only in obvious advertising.

— Mister Micawber

  • ' All of those quotation marks are unnecessary, Jobb-- every utterance should not be a slogan.
  • English uses slogans much more sparingly, and generally only in obvious advertising.
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'Since the beginning of this year, which has been characterized by fast-growth, vigorous momentum, optimized structure, and excellent quality, the overall economy of our city has exhibited a coordinated development of speed, structure and profits.'


All of those quotation marks are unnecessary, Jobb-- every utterance should not be a slogan. English uses slogans much more sparingly,
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Also thanks for reminding me of the usage of slogan, MM.
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