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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I joined the circulation group, the most common and was divided in two.

Is this grammatically correct?

Or does it have to be something like this -

I joined the circulation group, which was the most common and was divided in two.

Thanks!!
  

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The first one isn't right. The second one is "more correct", but I question whether something identified as a single instance ("the circulation group") can be more "common" than something else. Did you possibly mean "popular" rather than "common"?

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  • The first one isn't right.
  • The second one is "more correct", but I question whether something identified as a single instance ("the circulation group") can be more "common" than something else.
  • Did you possibly mean "popular" rather than "common"?
  • I can't tell whether "circulation group" is the right term without more context.
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The first one isn't right.

The second one is "more correct", but I question whether something identified as a single instance ("the circulation group") can be more "common" than something else. Did you possibly mean "popular" rather than "common"? I can't tell whether "circulation group" is the right term without more context.
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AnonymousI joined the circulation group, which was the most common and was divided in two.
That one is the better sentence, but I don't understand what you are saying.
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