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Today's societies consist of many technological inventions. The cars we ride, the tvs we watch and the devices we use in our free time have changed our way of living and our relationships. Technology has developed many things in our society, especially medication and war weapons. On the other hand, we can look to the negative things technology has caused like laziness. Technological inventions are classified according to their position in our lives.

The internet is the most affective technology in our life. While so many devices are not yet connected to the internet, some companies believe that 50 billions of devices will be connected to the internet by 2022. When this prediction becomes true, the whole life will be smart and billions of devices will be connectedto the internet for online shopping, online education and paying the bills.

In the second place, the huge data sharing will shape a new world and will affect many industries and organizations. The amount of data that people are producing is increasing with a massive rate, and this amount may be bigger in the future due to the increasing of electronic devices. In addition, the cost of storage of this data have declined which will make people demand more.

The robots have also affected many industries like car and space industries. Modern robots proved that they can play music, dance and respond to our orders. Unlike to some developing countries, developed counties consider robots as fundamental element in factories and houses. Robots can also improve human's life. If we have cultural acceptance to deal with them, they will do many jobs for us like car driving.

In conclusion, modern technologies have changed many spheres in our life like medication, transportation and social relationships. With this rapid increasing of electronic devices, we need to be aware of our relationships and life style, other wise technology will shape them in a way we don't want.