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Palinkasocsi Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Each/both?

Dear Forum Users,

Could anyone please tell me if this passage is grammatical or not:

As the discussion in Chapter 2 suggests, to provide a definition of irony is a challenging enterprise. Therefore, rather than making yet another attempt at defining it, this chapter offers a complementary approach that explains particular examples - ones which have already been referred to as metaphor in the literature. The 2 models that constitute that complementary explanation are Conceptual Metaphor Theory (…) and Blending Theory (…). Let us consider both of them in turn.

Especially the underlined part. Should I write 'Let us consider each of them in turn'?

Thank you!

Palinkasocsi
  

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It is too wordy. As the discussion in Chapter 2 suggests, providing a definition of irony is difficult. Instead, this chapter explains two specific models which have already been referred to as metaphor in the literature: the Conceptual Metaphor Theory (…) and the Blending Theory (…).

  • It is too wordy.
  • As the discussion in Chapter 2 suggests, providing a definition of irony is difficult.
  • Instead, this chapter explains two specific models which have already been referred to as metaphor in the literature: the Conceptual Metaphor Theory (…) and the Blending Theory (…).
  • Let us consider each in turn.
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It is too wordy.

As the discussion in Chapter 2 suggests, providing a definition of irony is difficult. Instead, this chapter explains two specific models which have already been referred to as metaphor in the literature: the Conceptual Metaphor Theory (…) and the Blending Theory (…). Let us consider each in turn.

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