...into the kitchen where Janet was busy lining lunch boxes up on the breakfast bar. Ken and the kids each grabbed their lunch box before heading out the door.
1) Is this written well?
2) Would grabbed each of their lunch box be better? (the lunch boxes are personalized with names on)
anonymous 1) Is this written well? Looks OK to me. anonymous 2) Would grabbed each of their lunch box be better?
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anonymous1) Is this written well?
Looks OK to me.
anonymous2) Would grabbed each of their lunch box be better? (the lunch boxes are personalized with names on)
No. That would not be grammatical.