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Chowbarry Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
E-mail for a professional advice
Please help me improve the following e-mail for a professional advice. Thank you.
Dear Mr. Fox,
We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones at the trenches of lawn bowl greening at our clubhouse.
In fact, our clubhouse have recently received a senior member, expressing his discontentment about the presence of large amount of small stones at the trenches of the lawn bowl greening, which cause considerable damage to his own expensive lawn bowls after these fall into the trenches every time and he questions us if those trenches with small stones violates the lawn bowl sports regulations and represents a below standard lawn bowl greening.
Since we are due to make a reply to his complaint, we hope you can let us know by tomorrow whether it is proper to place small stones at the trenches. If not, please advise us what kind of object should be placed at the trenches or simply leave the trenches empty. Thank you for your advice.
Regards,
Tommy
Dear Mr. Fox,
We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones at the trenches of lawn bowl greening at our clubhouse.
In fact, our clubhouse have recently received a senior member, expressing his discontentment about the presence of large amount of small stones at the trenches of the lawn bowl greening, which cause considerable damage to his own expensive lawn bowls after these fall into the trenches every time and he questions us if those trenches with small stones violates the lawn bowl sports regulations and represents a below standard lawn bowl greening.
Since we are due to make a reply to his complaint, we hope you can let us know by tomorrow whether it is proper to place small stones at the trenches. If not, please advise us what kind of object should be placed at the trenches or simply leave the trenches empty. Thank you for your advice.
Regards,
Tommy
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Dear Mr. Fox, We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones in the trenches of the lawn bowling green at our clubhouse. A senior member of our clubhouse has recently expressed his discontent at the presence of the many small stones in the trenches of the green, which cause considerable damage to his expensive ***** after these fall into the trenche s, a nd he has asked us if those trenches with small stones didn't violate the regulations and represent a substandard green.
- Dear Mr.
- Fox, We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones in the trenches of the lawn bowling green at our clubhouse.
- A senior member of our clubhouse has recently expressed his discontent at the presence of the many small stones in the trenches of the green, which cause considerable damage to his expensive ***** after these fall into the trenche s, a nd he has asked us if those trenches with small stones didn't violate the regulations and represent a substandard green.
- We hope you can let us know by tomorrow whether it is proper to place small stones in the trenches.
- If not, please advise us what we should do instead .
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Dear Mr. Fox,
We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones in the trenches of the lawn bowling green at our clubhouse.
A senior member of our clubhouse has recently expressed his discontent at the presence of the many small stones in the trenches of
We write to seek your professional advice on the appropriateness of placing small stones in the trenches of the lawn bowling green at our clubhouse.
A senior member of our clubhouse has recently expressed his discontent at the presence of the many small stones in the trenches of
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