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Roge0196 Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

E-mail answer - take a look!

Hi everybody from english forums.

I have today a e-mail to be sent in response to some technical problems.

Please, check it out and tell me your what you think. As usual I would be more than happy to heve your recommendations and corrections.

Thanks!!!

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Hi Mr. XXX,



It´s good to hear that you have lot of work to do and the perspectives are even better for the next months.



I have being informed from one of our distributors that they found out the problem It is the keyboard connector that is in some cases broken and in other cases not well conected.



The problem itself is quite easy to fix. Although some other distributors are still complaining, requiring from us - COMPANY XXX Brazil - to exchange the defective machines.



By now, I am waiting for an decision from our Country manager concerning this issue.
  

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Here it is. You should rephrase the last line. Roge0196 Hi Mr.

— Rafaelinrio

  • Here it is.
  • You should rephrase the last line.
  • Roge0196 Hi Mr.
  • ***, It´s good to hear that you have a lot of work to do and the perspectives are even better for the next months.
  • I have being been informed from by one of our distributors that they have found out what the problem is, It is the keyboard connector that is in some cases is broken and in other cases not well connected.
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Here it is. You should rephrase the last line.

Roge0196Hi Mr. ***,



It´s good to hear that you have a lot of work to do and the perspectives are even better for the next months.



I have being been informed from by one of our distributors that they have found out what the problem is, It is the keyboard con
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Hi Rafael-in-rio,


Thanks for your corrections and suggestions.

Bye!!!!
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