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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

E-mail after session

Hi there , i want to write an e-mail summarizing what we have discussed at the brainstorming meeting , please help how can i write in a more formal way the e-mail because it will include my boss as well. I will attach excel spreadsheet illustrating in a simple way what we have discussed and developed like a structure.

"Dear Team,

After our brainstorming session "XX"conducted on XXX we have discussed and brainstormed the following points :

-xx

-xx

Please find attached the excel file , illustrating in a simple way our XXXX structure so we can edit on it easily.

Kind Regards"


Please if possible , how can i write the e-mail in a more understandable way and formal as well.

  

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Your email is already quite formal enough; it just suffers from mistakes. Dear Team, In our brainstorming session, "XX", conducted on ***, we discussed the following points : -xx -xx Please find attached an Excel file illustrating in a simple way our XXXX structure so that we can edit it easily. Kind regards,

  • Your email is already quite formal enough; it just suffers from mistakes.
  • Dear Team, In our brainstorming session, "XX", conducted on ***, we discussed the following points : -xx -xx Please find attached an Excel file illustrating in a simple way our XXXX structure so that we can edit it easily.
  • Kind regards,
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Your email is already quite formal enough; it just suffers from mistakes.


Dear Team,

In our brainstorming session, "XX", conducted on ***, we discussed the following points :

-xx

-xx

Please find attached an Excel file illustrating in a simple way our XXXX structure so that we can edit it easily.


Kind regards,

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