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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at XXX Park, in XXX. You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one-hundred percent. Not only are they having much cosmetic surgery, they are spending much of what they have on make-ups -- I will tell you having a steady supply of various kinds of cream and replenishing it regularly does demand a lot of a young girl's finances.
Oh, I almost forgot. You asked me my address and telephone number at the meeting. My telephone number is XXX-XXXX and my address is ...
It was great meeting you and hope we can see each other more in the future.
Sincerely,
XXX
Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at XXX Park, in XXX. You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one-hundred percent. Not only are they having much cosmetic surgery, they are spending much of what they have on make-ups -- I will tell you having a steady supply of various kinds of cream and replenishing it regularly does demand a lot of a young girl's finances.
Oh, I almost forgot. You asked me my address and telephone number at the meeting. My telephone number is XXX-XXXX and my address is ...
It was great meeting you and hope we can see each other more in the future.
Sincerely,
XXX
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This looks pretty good to me. Just a couple of suggestions: Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at *** Park, in ***. You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one hundred percent.
- This looks pretty good to me.
- Just a couple of suggestions: Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at *** Park, in ***.
- You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one hundred percent.
- Not only are they having much cosmetic surgery, they are spending much of what they have on make-up -- I will tell you , having a steady supply of various kinds of cream and replenishing it regularly does demand a lot of a young girl's finances.
- Oh, I almost forgot.
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This looks pretty good to me. Just a couple of suggestions:
Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at *** Park, in ***. You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one hundred percent. Not only are they having much cosmetic surgery, they
Hi, it was nice seeing you yesterday at *** Park, in ***. You said that teens these days are too preoccupied with looks, and going to a doctor's office to get cosmetic surgery is common; and to that, I agree with you one hundred percent. Not only are they having much cosmetic surgery, they
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