DWRI 0091

Is this any ways I need to revise and edit the errors I made in my following essay, or does it make sense to you so far?

Lottery

Lottery is a contest in which tokens are sold from winning a game, the tokens selected in drawing. Each person that wins a game deserves a token for lottery. Raising money may be also a part of winning. If I won the lottery, I would use money to spend for the prize, save it to rent for a new house, and buy materials for my personal hygiene. Here are my tips or strategies for spending my money in about a few weeks in a row.

Speaking of a prize, I want to buy my own laptop for my personal use. The prizes should not be very expensive since I have lots of money. I must find out how much is cost, make sure I have enough, and purchase. Also buy a hard drive along with laptop. It would help ranging up to a lots of disk space, consist of 70GB. I hope my computer would speed up, too. My wish can come true if I could win that prize.

My special plan is to save money so I can rent a house. First, I will have to go online to offer something special by searching. Second, I will have to find one of the tenants early to find out what happens before later. I will make sure I get the right talent who has positive habits. Next, I would check the price to make sure I have enough. Then, I would sign up a rental agreement. Some of my agreements should be suggested as my following words. I would assume that a mansion has windows, stairs, four bedrooms, three floors, three bathrooms and a roof. Finally, I may check my mail to make sure my plan is working.

It is very important to buy personal things such as face wash, cream, and a pack of bar soaps. These items seem important to me because I am trying to stay clean. Each item I prefer must be cheap. For instance, face wash helps my face turn into a clear skin. Coconut creme covers my dried skin to dissolve. Bar soap also counts to help me stay clean.