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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Dvds

Why would u order dvds here when youre in China, supplier of numerous amounts of dvds and blurays for half the price?

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No. You have spelt 'you' wrong and missed lots of capital letters and some punctuation and other spelling. Please start again and write more thoughtfully.

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No. You have spelt 'you' wrong and missed lots of capital letters and some punctuation and other spelling. Please start again and write more thoughtfully. Then we will help you correct the problems you really cannot recognize.
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Why would you order DVDs here, when you are in China, supplier of numerous amounts of DVDs and Blurays for half the price?
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Much better, PJ.

Why would you order DVDs here, when you are in China, supplier of vast quantities of DVDs and Blu-rays for half the price?
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