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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Duvet bulges

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When the duvet isn't properly in the duvet cover with the duvet in all four corners of the duvet cover, the duvet bulges.The duvet will bulge if it's not correctly put in the duvet cover.
  

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Hi, Start by trying to eliminate as much of the unnatural repetition as you can. Clive

  • Hi, Start by trying to eliminate as much of the unnatural repetition as you can.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Start by trying to eliminate as much of the unnatural repetition as you can.

Clive
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Here is my try,

When the duvet isn't properly in the four corner of the cover, the duvet bulges.The duvet will bulge if it's not correctly put in the duvet cover.

Do you understand what I mean?

Can you help make it idiomatic?
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Hi,

Eliminate as much of the repetition as you can.

Clive
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When the duvet isn't properly in the four corner of the cover, the duvet will bulge.

Is this better? I don't know if people understand what I say? Do you?
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Hi,

When the duvet isn't properly in the four corner of the cover, the duvet will bulge.

Is this better? I don't know if people understand what I say? Do you? Yes.

I suggest

eg When the duvet isn't properly tucked into the four corners of the cover, it bulges.

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