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Moon7296 Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

during when

It was my ten-year-old son's first year on a Little League softball team. His team was not doing too well during a game when one of the boys hit the ball, but not very far.

Q) I found the underlined part is a little weird(or hard to translate) because of 'during' and a 'when' clause come at the same time. Do you think it's the best way to state the sentence like that or there is a better way?

Q2) Are some things omitted in the second underlined? (but it did not go very far?)
  

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moon7296 Q) I found the underlined part is a little weird(or hard to translate) because of 'during' and a 'when' clause come at the same time. Do you think it's the best way to state the sentence like that or there is a better way? It's OK as is.

  • moon7296 Q) I found the underlined part is a little weird(or hard to translate) because of 'during' and a 'when' clause come at the same time.
  • Do you think it's the best way to state the sentence like that or there is a better way?
  • It's OK as is.
  • 'during the game' indicates all the time spent playing the game until one of the boys hit the ball.
  • 'when' is almost like 'and then (almost suddenly)' or even 'until'.
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moon7296Q) I found the underlined part is a little weird(or hard to translate) because of 'during' and a 'when' clause come at the same time. Do you think it's the best way to state the sentence like that or there is a better way?
It's OK as is. 'during the game' indicates all the time spent playing the game until one of the boys hit the ball. 'when' is almos
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It was my ten-year-old son's first year on a Little League softball team. His team was not doing too well during a game when one of the boys hit the ball, but not very far.

The sentence has no underlining, but it is fine. The sentence has these ideas:

During the game - they are still playing.
The opposition was winning.
You son's teammate hit the ball.

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