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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Drinks

Hi, all. I'm writing a screenplay.

Context: Two friends sit talking and drinking beers.

The sentence: Susan gives Tara a look, then drinks.

Question: Is it OK or awkward to just write "then drinks" instead of eg. "then takes a sip/swig of her beer" or something else if it's already been established in the scene description that Susan and Tara are drinking beers?

  

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then drinks is fine.

  • then drinks is fine.
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then drinks is fine.

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