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Army5 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Dressing
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It was now the dressing time. I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara. She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and neck and brush off the excess powder with a powder puff. I would sport a red bindi in my forehead after my top lashes get quoted with eyeliners
It was now the dressing time. I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara. She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and neck and brush off the excess powder with a powder puff. I would sport a red bindi in my forehead after my top lashes get quoted with eyeliners
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I have underlined some problem areas: It was now the dressing time . I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara . She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and neck and brush off the excess powder with a powder puff.
- I have underlined some problem areas: It was now the dressing time .
- I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara .
- She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and neck and brush off the excess powder with a powder puff.
- I would sport a red bindi in my forehead after my top lashes get quoted with eyeliners
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I have underlined some problem areas:
It was now the dressing time. I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara. She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and n
It was now the dressing time. I was draped about in my favorite sea green and red color pavada davani [ silk skirt and half sari] Mother, though an apologia for a beautician, evinces great interest in making me look like an Apsara. She would now dust lightly a face powder over my face and n
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