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All of my life dreamed about being a pilot is gone after my eyes become blurred. All of my life dreamed about being a pilot has collapsed after my eyes become blurred. Are they OK?Thank you

Watchayakan · Accepted Answer

"My life dream of being a pilot is gone after my eyesight became blurred."

"My life dream of being a pilot has shattered ['collapsed' isn't too fit for this curumstance] after my eyes become blurred."

Goodman · Answer

All of my life dreamed about being a pilot is gone after my eyes become blurred.

All of my life dreamed about being a pilot has collapsed after my eyes become blurred.

Are they OK?

Thank you

The way these two sentences are constructed is incorrect. Here are several options for your reference:

You may choose to use “dream “ in verb, noun or gerund form but stick to the grammar rule.

All of my life (missing subject which is “I”) dreamed about being a pilot (this part should be a clause) is gone after my eyes become blurred.

All of my life (same reason) dreamed about being a pilot [has collapsed] after my eyes become blurred.

My life-long dream of being a pilot is gone after my eyes become blurred.
All my life I have dreamed of being a pilot which is gone after my eyes become blurred.
I have dreamed to be a pilot all my life but that dream was shattered after my eyes become blurred.

BW2/3 · Answer

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Marius Hancu · Answer

Or, just perhaps:

The dream of my life, of being/becoming a pilot, is gone after my eyes have become blurred.

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