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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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Dream cars
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This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He likes cars, especially those luxury sedans which are his dream cars. In order to take a close look at these dream cars, he works part-time in a car wash to watch those dream cars while working. He makes painstaking efforts with every kind of cars, so that he will be able to become a car designer in the future.
This is my brother, and he is a Scorpio. He likes cars, especially those luxury sedans which are his dream cars. In order to take a close look at these dream cars, he works part-time in a car wash to watch those dream cars while working. He makes painstaking efforts with every kind of cars, so that he will be able to become a car designer in the future.
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This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He likes cars, especially luxury sedans, which are his dream cars.
- This is my brother.
- He is a Scorpio.
- He likes cars, especially luxury sedans, which are his dream cars.
- In order to take a closer look at these, he works part-time in a car wash.
- He makes painstaking efforts with every car, so that he will be able to become an automobile designer in the future.
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This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He likes cars, especially luxury sedans, which are his dream cars. In order to take a closer look at these, he works part-time in a car wash. He makes painstaking efforts with every car, so that he will be able to become an automobile designer in the future.
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