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Dauphin Bleu Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Drawn my attention

Hi, I'd like to ask something. Do you think this sentence is right?
I like it so much, it has drawn my attention.
Can I use the words drawn my attention or should it replaced with another word?
  

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Dauphin Bleu Do you think this sentence is right? I like it so much, it has drawn my attention. It is a reasonable sentence, but the phrase seems rather lackluster for liking something very much.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dauphin Bleu Do you think this sentence is right?
  • I like it so much, it has drawn my attention.
  • It is a reasonable sentence, but the phrase seems rather lackluster for liking something very much.
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Dauphin BleuDo you think this sentence is right? I like it so much, it has drawn my attention.
It is a reasonable sentence, but the phrase seems rather lackluster for liking something very much.
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Do you have some other suggestion?
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It is difficult to imagine how the liking came before the attention; in fact, I would expect both to be the same event.

I like it very much.

That seems to me to be quite adequate; the rest is superfluous.
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Well.. Actually, I was about to say that something was very attractive and it got my attention. The way it attracted me last forever in my mind. So, I'm looking for a way to emphasize it in my sentence. Saying I like it very much wouldn't really explain how it has my eyes on it back then. If you have any suggestion it would be great.
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I found it very attractive.
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Simple yet magnificent. Thank you!
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