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Army5 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Dove of Justice
Hi, please correct the following paragraph. Thank you.
The year that was,
spinning through webs of corruption
shadowing suns of morality,
dwarfed the nation's honor;
hoisted flags of shame; and
wounded the ‘Dove of Justice.'
The year that was,
spinning through webs of corruption
shadowing suns of morality,
dwarfed the nation's honor;
hoisted flags of shame; and
wounded the ‘Dove of Justice.'
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The year that was, spinning through webs of corruption shadowing the sun of morality, shrivelled the nation's honor , hoisted flags of shame , and wounded the dove of justice . I have not tried to repair the mixed metaphors, since the whole sentence is a congeries of them.
- The year that was, spinning through webs of corruption shadowing the sun of morality, shrivelled the nation's honor , hoisted flags of shame , and wounded the dove of justice .
- I have not tried to repair the mixed metaphors, since the whole sentence is a congeries of them.
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The year that was, spinning through webs of corruption shadowing the sun of morality, shrivelled the nation's honor, hoisted flags of shame, and wounded the dove of justice.
I have not tried to repair the mixed metaphors, since the whole sentence is a congeries of them.
I have not tried to repair the mixed metaphors, since the whole sentence is a congeries of them.
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