Double checking the syntax.

Hello all,

I am new here. My name is Steve. I am Polish but have been leaving abroad for many years. Most of the time I do just fine with my English but I need native speakers to see if the syntax of the few sentences is correct. Something that I can't always see and no software can fix. I am making a game and want to make sure I make no silly mistakes that people will pick on.

Feel free to add some suggestions or changes if you think some sentences would sound better differently. The game is happening in New York and is related to Italian mafia so sentence might be incorrect with a bit of Italian mobster touch if you know what I mean! Words in bold are unique names. Thanks a lot for help and Happy New, grammatically correct, Year! So here they are:

Sometimes Gloie gets tired and she will return back to the park. Go and get her back to maintain increased Public Trust recharge rate from her presence!

If you rate the game(hopefully as high as New York's skyscrapers), Glowworm Gloie will join you!

Public Trust increases slowly with time, people are cautious in these troubled times.

The Meddler is a nasty, stationary enemy. He will lurk in the shadows and slowly decrease your Public Trust until you find him.

The more cars you have at the end of each round the higher the score multiplier is!

Each car has four stages of damage, on the last stage, it will be stolen for good.

When you move across the roofs enemies will become anxious and move much slower!

I have run out of tips...

Some enemies like Capo, can steal the car in just one go!

As you fight your way to Al Carpone, his mobsters will get quicker, more determined and will steal cars quicker!

Tier One Collectibles respawn at the beginning of each round.

Tier Two Collectibles do not respawn too often, time their usage wisely!

Visit LoOnar Forge website to share your opinions about The Watch and see what is coming next!

You can start a new game from the highest wave that you have finished in your previous games.

You can change quality settings in the options if you feel that game is not running smooth.

When you move across the roofs enemies get anxious and move much slower!

You can start a new game from the highest wave that you have beaten in your previous games.

When you minimize The Watch, it will pause until you activate it again."

When you eliminate mobsters shortly after they appear on the map, they will yield a higher score.

Your achievements are based on every single game that you have played.

After you descend on to the streets from the roofs, the top meter will show for how long enemies will still walk slower."

Stay on the roofs as much as possible!

Use "Back" button on your phone to display in-game menu or pause the game.

You can skip to the next song by decreasing music volume to zero and then increase it back again.

If you know why the "Continue" button at the bottom of this screen is not always responding as it should let us know. We will buy you a hot chocolate if can you fix it!

"But really, stay on the roofs."

Thank you again.

Steve

LoOnar Forge

P.S.

If you want to contact me for any reason please write to loonarforge @ gmail.com