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Indigosoul77 Posted 9 years ago
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Dot dot dot.

Hi, hope you can help me with this? Regarding "..." for an online story I'm writing, is it appropriate to use it like this?

Thank you very much!


Time and time again, Reina, a born again renegade,

had a shadowy tormentor chase her in her dreams...always

growling, always shrouded in a mist of evil intent.

  

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It's OK. But if you do it a lot, it could start to be a little annoying to the readers.

  • It's OK.
  • But if you do it a lot, it could start to be a little annoying to the readers.
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It's OK.

But if you do it a lot, it could start to be a little annoying to the readers.

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Hi, hope you can help me with this? Regarding "..." for an online story I'm writing, is it appropriate to use it like this?

Thank you very much!


Time and time again, Reina, a born again renegade,

had a shadowy tormentor chase her in her dreams...always

growling, always shrouded in a mist of evil intent.

I would

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