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Mohamed Yehia Posted 13 years ago
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Dose this sentence make sense ?!
I had taken course in web design and development. I was working on Photoshop and Dreamweaver program. I entered my first foot step in the web design and development industry very quickly. I was trained in web design and development at a small company, and I am able to create and design web sites. My work was so sufficient and appreciable
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Hello again, Sarah. Your tenses are a bit off - you've used the pluperfect, the imperfect and the simple past, to all represent the same period of time. There are a few other minor errors.
- Hello again, Sarah.
- Your tenses are a bit off - you've used the pluperfect, the imperfect and the simple past, to all represent the same period of time.
- There are a few other minor errors.
- Also, "sufficient and appreciable" sounds a bit odd to me; it's not something a native speaker would say, although it's clear what you mean.
- I would write it something like this.
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Hello again, Sarah.
Your tenses are a bit off - you've used the pluperfect, the imperfect and the simple past, to all represent the same period of time. There are a few other minor errors. Also, "sufficient and appreciable" sounds a bit odd to me; it's not something a native speaker would say, although it's clear what you mean.
I would write it something like this.
I took a
Your tenses are a bit off - you've used the pluperfect, the imperfect and the simple past, to all represent the same period of time. There are a few other minor errors. Also, "sufficient and appreciable" sounds a bit odd to me; it's not something a native speaker would say, although it's clear what you mean.
I would write it something like this.
I took a
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Ops ! Its very funny, I didnt see it .Thanks David . Wish you a great day .
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