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Benita Posted 21 years ago

Don't Stop Me From Loving You

0 Don’t ever stop me from loving you 02br
00Can’t do it even if I wanted to 02br
00I love you from the deepest depths of my being 02br
00Oh how I wish this love you could feel! 02br
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00Would you love me 02br
00As much as I love you? 02br
00Love me, love me, love me 02br
00For all that I was & am & will be. 02br
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00My dearest darling, my love, my life 02br
00Will our lives always be this way? 02br
00Meeting & parting maketh our love to grow 02br
00A love that has no reason, no fear, no sorrow 02br
00A love that knows no yesterday & has no tomorrow. 0-
  

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0I presume this is a song; as a poem, it is vague and repetitive. A catchy melody would be of infinite assistance. 0-

— Mister Micawber

  • 0I presume this is a song; as a poem, it is vague and repetitive.
  • A catchy melody would be of infinite assistance.
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0I presume this is a song; as a poem, it is vague and repetitive. A catchy melody would be of infinite assistance. 0-
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0 Hello Benita 02br
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00You might want to think again about 'maketh': the language of the piece is generally current, but 'maketh' adds an odd archaic note! 02br
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00MrP 0-
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0 Hello Miscter Micawber, 02br
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00Gosh! I am beginning to realise that I write more songs or rather songish poetry! Please keep evaluating & sending in your advice. 02br
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00Many thanks 02br
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0 Hello MrP, 02br
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00Yes I felt that too - guess the little change may make it sound better. Thank you! 02br
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