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Could you help me with this sentence, please? It doesn't sound natural to me at all, but I can't figure out how to improve it:

"Currently, there are ongoing final productions of products that have already been communicated as end-of-life to the market."

Or how about this:

"Currently, there are ongoing final productions of products that have already been communicated as end-of-life to the market."

Thanks for any suggestions!

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Products are being manufactured that have already been declared obsolete and no longer supported.

Anonymous · Answer

Sorry, I forgot an important part of the sentence! Actually, it's essential to mention that this production will end soon. So basically I need one sentence expressing this:

There are certain products which have already been declared end-of-life, but at the moment, they're still being produced. But these productions will expire (?) soon.

What do you think? Can I say something like this:

"Currently, the last products are being manufactured that have already been declared end-of-life."

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Usually when a product is declared "end-of-life," that means that there is no warranty or support as of that moment in time. These products are usually superseded by a later version or model, and customers may be offered a trade-in.

There can be an "end-of-life" date given in the future, for example, the products manufactured today will no longer be warrantied or supported after Dec. 31, 2017.

Anonymous · Answer

Right, that's exactly what the text means. The products (from my text) are indeed superseded by a later version. So would my sentence be correct?

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