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Courtkanee Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

does this work?

As I showered, my mind raced with the same questions as the night before.

Does that fit or should I change it to

As I showered, my mind raced with the same questions I had the night before.
  

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The first works, Court.

  • The first works, Court.
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