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Lokon Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Does this sound right ?

As far as I could see, I saw mountains, nothing but mountains. I didn't know what to do. I sat down and cried, I cried for a long time.

Does these sentences sound appropriate when I'm writing a story in past tense.
  

Top answer

Hi, Yes. It would be better grammar to put a period after the first 'cried'. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Yes.
  • It would be better grammar to put a period after the first 'cried'.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Yes.

It would be better grammar to put a period after the first 'cried'.

Clive
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