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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Does this sound ok

Marketing fallacies procreate and indulge naive perceptions, and extort within us the dreaded three-word phrase they love, "I want it"
  

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Hi, Marketing fallacies procreate and indulge naive perceptions, and extort within us the dreaded three-word phrase they love, "I want it" No, the word choice is completely unnatural. In addition, it sounds like you are deliberately trying to say something simple in a complicated way. eg What's a 'marketing fallacy'?

  • Hi, Marketing fallacies procreate and indulge naive perceptions, and extort within us the dreaded three-word phrase they love, "I want it" No, the word choice is completely unnatural.
  • In addition, it sounds like you are deliberately trying to say something simple in a complicated way.
  • eg What's a 'marketing fallacy'?
  • Try to say it as simply as you can.
  • Then we may be able to suggest a fancier and more formal way to say it.
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Hi,
Marketing fallacies procreate and indulge naive perceptions, and extort within us the dreaded three-word phrase they love, "I want it"

No, the word choice is completely unnatural. In addition, it sounds like you are deliberately trying to say something simple in a complicated way.

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