Does this sound natural? If not how would you say it?

Does this sound natural? If not how would you say it? Thank you!

Some people are keen on loud places, others prefer somewhere more peaceful and quite. Im more of type two and my favorite place to visit is my grandparents' house

First of all, let me help you imagine how lovely it is. It's an one-storey detached house. The house is painted yellow. It has five rooms: one living room, 2 bed rooms, one bath room equipped with a shower and a bathtub and a kitchen. The house is always tidy as my grandma cleans it up every morning. There's a back yard and a garden which is also at the back of the house. My grandparents plant many fruit tree there such as guava tree, whip tree. I usually go to their garden, pick some fruits and enjoy them with everyone.