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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Does this sound good or should I get rid of the "in combat" part?

Maritia engaged Japfin in combat, and during the fight, the enslaved warrior killed both the commander of Vyrox and Maritia’s personal bodyguard, however, she ultimately slew him.
  

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Maritia engaged Japfin in combat, and during the fight, the enslaved warrior killed both the commander of Vyrox and Maritia’s personal bodyguard. However, she ultimately slew him.

  • Maritia engaged Japfin in combat, and during the fight, the enslaved warrior killed both the commander of Vyrox and Maritia’s personal bodyguard.
  • However, she ultimately slew him.
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Maritia engaged Japfin in combat, and during the fight, the enslaved warrior killed both the commander of Vyrox and Maritia’s personal bodyguard. However, she ultimately slew him.

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