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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Does this sound good? Btws- It is the Solamnic Knighthood

Naming himself the Lord Marshal of Solamnia, Jaymes reunited the three Orders of the Knighthood into a cohesive army and led the Solamnic forces against Ankhar’s monstrous troops.
  

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It sounds good to me. There's only one thing I'd signal: are you sure it's written Marshal ? I'm more used to see the name with a double L, like Marshall , but maybe it can also be written like that.

— MrGuedes

  • It sounds good to me.
  • There's only one thing I'd signal: are you sure it's written Marshal ?
  • I'm more used to see the name with a double L, like Marshall , but maybe it can also be written like that.
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It sounds good to me. There's only one thing I'd signal: are you sure it's written Marshal? I'm more used to see the name with a double L, like Marshall, but maybe it can also be written like that.
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"Marshal" is not a name there, it's a title, and it is spelled correctly.
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OK, thank you, then, enoon!
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