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Lost Star appeared again during the War of Souls in 421 AC, when the Queen Mother, Laurana Kanan, wielded the blade against the Green Dragon Overlord Beryllinthranox when the mighty dragon and her army attacked the elven capital city of Qualinost.
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Yes.
— Mister Micawber
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