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It should be noted that the task of navigating a vehicle requires varying levels of attention; very high or very low mental workload can result in incomplete understanding, inadequate attention and information processing.
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To me, it is not tremendously clear how the part after the semicolon relates to the part before. As you've written it, the last part says these three things can result: 1. incomplete understanding 2.
- To me, it is not tremendously clear how the part after the semicolon relates to the part before.
- As you've written it, the last part says these three things can result: 1.
- incomplete understanding 2.
- inadequate attention 3.
- information processing If you mean "inadequate information processing" then you need to write "incomplete understanding[,] and inadequate attention and information processing".
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To me, it is not tremendously clear how the part after the semicolon relates to the part before.
As you've written it, the last part says these three things can result:
1. incomplete understanding
2. inadequate attention
3. information processing
If you mean "inadequate information processing" then you need to write "incomplete understanding[,] and inadequate a
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