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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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He has excellent communication and leadership skills. However, in order to fulfil his qualification to complete his proposed study, Community Service Work course, he would develop more skills, in particularity solving problem skills and academic knowledge from lectures.

  

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He has excellent communication and leadership skills. <<< OK Your next sentence has a lot of problems. I've noted some, below.

  • He has excellent communication and leadership skills.
  • <<< OK Your next sentence has a lot of problems.
  • I've noted some, below.
  • Can you try to say it in a simpler way?
  • in order to fulfil his qualification to complete <<< what does this mean?
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He has excellent communication and leadership skills. <<< OK


Your next sentence has a lot of problems. I've noted some, below. Can you try to say it in a simpler way?

in order to fulfil his qualification to complete <<< what does this mean?

he needs to develop more skills <<< do you mean this?

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