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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Does this small sentence make sense to you?

I have to write a very important college essay.

please see if this sentence makes sense:

It has been exhilarating to work with such talented musicians and incredibly satisfying to be able to contribute constructively to discussions with seasoned musicians who have years more experience than I have.

is "years more" a proper way of writing this? basically i want to express that they have a shit load more experience than i have... how can i do this formally??

or should it be "years of more experience than i have?"

thanks a lot!! =D
  

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Anonymous It has been exhilarating to work with such talented musicians and incredibly satisfying to be able to contribute constructively to discussions with seasoned musicians who have years more experience than I have. The sentence is OK though a bit wordy.

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  • Anonymous It has been exhilarating to work with such talented musicians and incredibly satisfying to be able to contribute constructively to discussions with seasoned musicians who have years more experience than I have.
  • The sentence is OK though a bit wordy.
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AnonymousIt has been exhilarating to work with such talented musicians and incredibly satisfying to be able to contribute constructively to discussions with seasoned musicians who have years more experience than I have.
The sentence is OK though a bit wordy.
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