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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
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Does this sentences make sense? please help

Could someone help me with this sentence?

1 In some shows, smaller roles grow and become main characters as the show progresses, in others the main characters are the same from start of the show to the end.

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Very good. I would just suggest: In some shows, smaller roles grow and progressively become main characters; in others, the main characters are there from the start.

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  • Very good.
  • I would just suggest: In some shows, smaller roles grow and progressively become main characters; in others, the main characters are there from the start.
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Very good. I would just suggest: In some shows, smaller roles grow and progressively become main characters; in others, the main characters are there from the start.
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In some shows, smaller roles grow and become main characters as the rehearsals/performances progress; in others, the characters remain the same from start to finish.
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