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These project raise awareness- in the artistic, original way- of the growing enviromental problems (e. g. shrinking water resources) that concern each of us. This article is submitted due to the Earth day.
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If you are concerned about formal essay-style writing, try to avoid using dashes or parentheses. And using both in a single sentence is especially poor. g.
- If you are concerned about formal essay-style writing, try to avoid using dashes or parentheses.
- And using both in a single sentence is especially poor.
- g.
- In an artistic and original way, these projects raise awareness, of the growing environmental problems such as shrinking water resources that concern us all.
- This article is submitted because it is Earth Day.
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If you are concerned about formal essay-style writing, try to avoid using dashes or parentheses. And using both in a single sentence is especially poor. In addition, spell out 'for example' instead of writing e.g.
In an artistic and original way, these projects raise awareness, of the growing environmental problems such as shrinking water resources that concern
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