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0"Although in the United States the FAA do not permit cell calls on flights, but wi-fi connections because it does not impide communications between pilots and control towers as cell phones do."02br02br00I want to say that cell phone calls interfere on pilot's communications and wi-fi connections don't do it.02br02br00Thanks!0-

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

0Hi andreamaral and welcome to English Forums. 02br
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01font00"Although in the United States the FAA do not permit cell calls on flights, but wi-fi connections because it does not impide communications between pilots and control towers as cell phones do."02font02br
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01font00I want to say that cell phone calls interfere on pilot's communications and wi-fi connections don't do it.02font02br
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00It's a lot to try to put into once sentence. Does the part about the FAA not permitting the cell calls really need to be in this?02br
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00Unlike cell phones calls, which are prohibited by the FAA on flights in the United States, wif-fi connections do not interfere with communications beetween pilots and control towers.0-

Andreamaral · Answer

0Thanks Grammr Greek.02br
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00Actually, i need to do a summany of a news. It must sound natural in a few words and in a informal style.02br
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00What can i do with my first sentence?, you know what i mean with it?02br
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00Thanks0-

BarbaraPA · Answer

0I gave you an alternative, natural-sounding one in my post.01blockquote

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10Unlike cell phones calls, which are prohibited by the FAA on flights in the United States, wif-fi connections do not interfere with communications beetween pilots and control towers.12br
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