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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Does this sentence sound grammatically correct to you?
Does this sentence sound grammatically correct to you? If not, how would you suggest changing it to do so?
"My experience as a waiter and my business education have developed a penchant for the field of hospitality management."
Thanks.
"My experience as a waiter and my business education have developed a penchant for the field of hospitality management."
Thanks.
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My business education, stimulated by my experience as a waiter, has developed in me a strong interest in the field of hospitality management.
- My business education, stimulated by my experience as a waiter, has developed in me a strong interest in the field of hospitality management.
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My business education, stimulated by my experience as a waiter, has developed in me a strong interest in the field of hospitality management.
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Hi,
Does this sentence sound grammatically correct to you? If not, how would you suggest changing it to do so?
"My experience as a waiter and my business education have developed a penchant for the field of hospitality management."
The grammar is OK, but the meaning is not.
Things (eg experience, education) do not develop a penchant. People devel
Does this sentence sound grammatically correct to you? If not, how would you suggest changing it to do so?
"My experience as a waiter and my business education have developed a penchant for the field of hospitality management."
The grammar is OK, but the meaning is not.
Things (eg experience, education) do not develop a penchant. People devel
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