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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Does this sentence sound good and correct?
Is this sentence completely correct and sound good? Particularly with the "she possessed" part? When Laurana knew it was time to ready the dragonlance she possessed to kill Beryllinthranox, she threw Lost Star (magical sword) off the Tower of the Sun.
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I'd just say When Laurana knew it was time to ready her dragonlance to kill Beryllinthranox, she threw Lost Star ( the magical sword) off the Tower of the Sun.
- I'd just say When Laurana knew it was time to ready her dragonlance to kill Beryllinthranox, she threw Lost Star ( the magical sword) off the Tower of the Sun.
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I'd just say
When Laurana knew it was time to ready her dragonlance to kill Beryllinthranox, she threw Lost Star (the magical sword) off the Tower of the Sun.
When Laurana knew it was time to ready her dragonlance to kill Beryllinthranox, she threw Lost Star (the magical sword) off the Tower of the Sun.
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